Comments on: FRIDAY FLASH: Rum and Slaves http://www.mmcgrath.co.uk/archives/93 Thu, 01 Apr 2010 17:24:29 +0200 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8 hourly 1 By: Shaun CG http://www.mmcgrath.co.uk/archives/93/comment-page-1#comment-140 Shaun CG Sat, 01 Dec 2007 13:40:52 +0000 http://mmcgrath.co.uk/2007/11/30/friday-flash-rum-and-slaves/#comment-140 Once again you excel, Martin! This is really well-written and I want to read more. Once again you excel, Martin! This is really well-written and I want to read more.

]]> By: Martin McGrath http://www.mmcgrath.co.uk/archives/93/comment-page-1#comment-141 Martin McGrath Sat, 01 Dec 2007 12:21:46 +0000 http://mmcgrath.co.uk/2007/11/30/friday-flash-rum-and-slaves/#comment-141 Jim DiGris? Never heard of him, and neither have you. Right? Jim DiGris? Never heard of him, and neither have you. Right?

]]> By: Neil http://www.mmcgrath.co.uk/archives/93/comment-page-1#comment-143 Neil Sat, 01 Dec 2007 11:08:30 +0000 http://mmcgrath.co.uk/2007/11/30/friday-flash-rum-and-slaves/#comment-143 It's good. I really think you should develop it into something longer. As GLP says it feels like the opening of a novel. Welcome back and I hope you're feeling better. It’s good. I really think you should develop it into something longer. As GLP says it feels like the opening of a novel.

Welcome back and I hope you’re feeling better.

]]> By: Dan http://www.mmcgrath.co.uk/archives/93/comment-page-1#comment-142 Dan Sat, 01 Dec 2007 10:28:27 +0000 http://mmcgrath.co.uk/2007/11/30/friday-flash-rum-and-slaves/#comment-142 Marvellous first sentence, really drew me in. Enjoyed the whole thing, apart from one thing which popped into my head and wouldn't leave...the founder of the bank was James DiGris? Did he ever shorten it to Jim? Was he a little...slippery? Marvellous first sentence, really drew me in. Enjoyed the whole thing, apart from one thing which popped into my head and wouldn’t leave…the founder of the bank was James DiGris? Did he ever shorten it to Jim? Was he a little…slippery?

]]> By: GLP http://www.mmcgrath.co.uk/archives/93/comment-page-1#comment-139 GLP Fri, 30 Nov 2007 13:21:10 +0000 http://mmcgrath.co.uk/2007/11/30/friday-flash-rum-and-slaves/#comment-139 Welcome back! You're correct when you say this reads like the opening part of something longer. Much longer. It feels to me like the start of a novel, and I'm intrigued to see the role this bank has played in your alternate history. Welcome back! You’re correct when you say this reads like the opening part of something longer. Much longer. It feels to me like the start of a novel, and I’m intrigued to see the role this bank has played in your alternate history.

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