Friday Flash: Too Late Spaceman

Hitting and running. Unbelievably busy at the moment, finishing off the new Focus and putting to bed the magazine at work.

Afraid this is an oldie and not really a goldie.

Promise more effort next week, off to read my daughter her bedtime story.

Too late, spaceman

“Five…”

The astronaut scanned the console. All green. Good to go.

“…four…”

Far away engines roared, his helmet muffled the noises but vibrations still rattled his teeth.

“…three…”

He thought of the crowd, miles away, cheering. He imagined his parents and his wife and child. He smiled.

“…two…”

He would be a hero. The first man on Mars. Three years in space. His boy would be almost full grown when he returned. Three years without his wife. Three years and his father, already sick, might be dead.

“…one…”

Was it really worth it?

“Wait!”

“…blast off.”

1 Comment so far

  1. Gareth on August 18th, 2007

    Wow - wierdly similar to my entry this week in tone and theme.

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